Danny Draper

Rookie - 338 Points (14 July 1963 / Kiama, New South Wales, Australia)

As One


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I

A m

O n e

E a c h

L e a r n

W i s d o m

T h r o u g h

K n o w l e d g e
All
Are
One
Inextricably interconnected indivisible by interdependence
Each as one, all as one, or all is none all is undone
That won as one can be done, one as one as one.

Submitted: Sunday, February 26, 2012
Edited: Thursday, March 01, 2012

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  • Freshman - 1,596 Points Susan Lacovara (11/12/2013 10:35:00 PM)

    Reminds me of a house of cards....stacking one after one, building a higher structure, stabilizing with the joined foundation, but if one, displaced, one, removed, the collapse inevitable...fantastic piece, my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (9/27/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    i like the form very creative. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Benjamin Michael Clark (8/21/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    This one is unique. I like the structure. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,411 Points * Sunprincess * (11/21/2012 9:12:00 PM)

    very creative..had to read this one more than once..excellent write. :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (9/23/2012 10:24:00 PM)

    'Inextricably inter connected, indivisible by inter dependence', yet am one! Unique with a disticnt corporal frame and a distinct individuality, yet how interconnected ! ! Wonderful write with an arresting structure! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Wabi Sabi (9/20/2012 8:20:00 PM)

    it is true, simple and wisdomous! thanks for share! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gabhriel Londe (6/29/2012 5:08:00 PM)

    Nice structure and drive. Almost like a growning snowball effect in my mind... Words being loose at first, and finally tightening up into a fist, striking with a flurry of words at the end. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,181 Points Walterrean Salley (5/5/2012 7:49:00 PM)

    As billions, we are individual souls. And yet, we are one race of people [human race], so connected by our dependence upon one another, One needs the other in order to survive. Each is an individul. But all are a unit: no man is an island, no man stands alone] Each man is my brother. Each man is my friend. Very well presented. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Deeks (3/13/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    Hello Danny... Great layout to produce the perfect thought patter... This reminds me of beads on an abacus, each one useless and pointless on their own but gain relevance by the beads sat next too. Never actually mould but all sit well beside each other..But every bead counts :) .Bravo Mr Poet :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sniffing Barry (3/5/2012 7:01:00 AM)

    Hats off... superb written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (3/1/2012 3:59:00 PM)

    Interesting this. Try mine - An Actuely Obtuse Pathagorean Lyric -
    Thanks for the comment.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,905 Points Soulful Heart (3/1/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    Pyramid in words...............unique and one of the kind.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,379 Points Dave Walker (2/29/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    I had to read this a few times, it played with
    my mind a bit. Love how it starts.
    A fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,070 Points Diane Hine (2/27/2012 4:24:00 AM)

    Won done- I mean, Well done! (Report) Reply

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