Dr subhendu kar (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

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it is all through feeling of lone voice
as stuck at a point of time and space
aloofness heaves heart yet ruefully
by pangs of sorrow and separation,

quest riffles deep in void by silence
dream desiccates as a desert in summer
horizon dips in silhouettes by sunset
heart flips to know its room of repose
awe bespeaks of melding into breeze

passion meanders waking from midsummer
as glance peeks into neighbor `s window
lest resilience may find lost shadow again
love consummates cloud when explodes

sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment
verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays
heart inflames within streaming by blood
as joy rambles over glow of own heaven
grin seems to proliferates by truth of glimpse

Dr subhendu kar
Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2010
Edited: Thursday, January 21, 2010


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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/6/2010 11:50:00 AM)

    …sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment
    verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays...’

    ‘Sky looks for
    Enlightenment
    Thro’ entertainment
    In azurement
    Hallowed by Sun God’s
    Ray galore
    Where verdant allure’ ~ niv…imbed -> diffused -> perfuse -> suffuse
    10//10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (1/23/2010 10:37:00 AM)

    Another fantastic poem.Out of the last three posted I like this best.The poem depicts pang of separation and the desire to get back the lost link.But simultaneously, as per my understanding, the last two lines instill hope or rejuvenate the mind even under the singular condition.What I meant, if we get conditioned to a separated situation, we perhaps reorient ourselves to derive pleasure from whereever we are.

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  • Riyaz Gupta (1/21/2010 8:33:00 AM)

    Use of colors in the last stanza is amazing......Amongst your new poems, I liked it the most, as here the poet seems to free himself from unnecessary burden of words.

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  • Anju Addanki (1/20/2010 2:06:00 AM)

    This is so true and good one.

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  • Anju Addanki (1/20/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    This is so true and good one.

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  • Anju Addanki (1/20/2010 2:04:00 AM)

    this so true another good one

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