Dr subhendu kar (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)
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it is all through feeling of lone voice
as stuck at a point of time and space
aloofness heaves heart yet ruefully
by pangs of sorrow and separation,
quest riffles deep in void by silence
dream desiccates as a desert in summer
horizon dips in silhouettes by sunset
heart flips to know its room of repose
awe bespeaks of melding into breeze
passion meanders waking from midsummer
as glance peeks into neighbor `s window
lest resilience may find lost shadow again
love consummates cloud when explodes
sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment
verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays
heart inflames within streaming by blood
as joy rambles over glow of own heaven
grin seems to proliferates by truth of glimpse
Comments about this poem (! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***AS QUEST RIFFLES DEEP***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 by Dr subhendu kar )
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…sky dapples in blue by gleams of enlightenment
verdant green redeems in glaze by sun-rays...’
‘Sky looks for
Enlightenment
Thro’ entertainment
In azurement
Hallowed by Sun God’s
Ray galore
Where verdant allure’ ~ niv…imbed -> diffused -> perfuse -> suffuse
10//10++
Ms. Nivedita
UK
Another fantastic poem.Out of the last three posted I like this best.The poem depicts pang of separation and the desire to get back the lost link.But simultaneously, as per my understanding, the last two lines instill hope or rejuvenate the mind even under the singular condition.What I meant, if we get conditioned to a separated situation, we perhaps reorient ourselves to derive pleasure from whereever we are.
Use of colors in the last stanza is amazing......Amongst your new poems, I liked it the most, as here the poet seems to free himself from unnecessary burden of words.
This is so true and good one.
This is so true and good one.
this so true another good one