sallam yassin

Bronze Star - 2,151 Points (05/06/1968 / Hargeisa, Somaliland)

As Woman In Her Man To See - Poem by sallam yassin

As a woman in her time odd or good in a man
She needy a complex
Of me but not crook
Which colors of all flowers creatively I contain
Flowers tranquilly lure that scents what she trace
So immense the honey then she holds in lips and the heart so deep sweet
Mostly I should be her man
As she dream
Caring and kindle
As a wisdom of ancient told me
To make her blossom
At the peak of hue grace
No niggle as a sister man
But be sweet
Talk to the soul
Don’t be timber
Her feeling talks
Through the eyes of her
And words make some time illusions
Pal
If u like the sea
So
Then woman’s secret
Hidden in deep to see
Don’t embrace the sea
If u don’t have the will
Or weak
Stay out
At beach
Watch
And Listen as the waves pass roar
Only if u have the courage
And the passion to see
Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine
reveal the beauty deepen
Sleeping in her soul go in dare
And see
So you win the pearl gift man
Out of bottom of sea


Comments about As Woman In Her Man To See by sallam yassin

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/1/2013 4:54:00 PM)

    a beautifully written poem. so you win the pearl gift man out of bottom of sea. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/1/2013 4:39:00 PM)

    a nice write. So you win the pear; gift man out of bottom of sea. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/21/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine / beautiful line this is the poem of great hope with slight disparity , confident so high based on emotion a lovely one.10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 799 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/21/2013 1:45:00 PM)

    so it's hard to win the pearl of love that rests deep down in heart-heart like an ocean, beautiful imagery and very emotional write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (5/21/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    a mind blowing and a cracking poem..in the following lines.. which ends the poem magnificently,100 / 10 ha ha.........Then woman’s secret
    Hidden in deep to see
    Don’t embrace the sea
    If u don’t have the will
    Or weak
    Stay out
    At beach
    Watch
    And Listen as the waves pass roar
    Only if u have the courage
    And the passion to see
    Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine
    reveal the beauty deepen
    Sleeping in her soul go in dare
    And see
    So you win the pearl gift man
    Out of bottom of sea (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/21/2013 4:36:00 AM)

    reveal the beauty, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 21, 2013


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