hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 68,679 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

At Present - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It is peaceful mind
That remains kind
To keep body
In tune with harmony

You my find people
Restless and always in trouble
Over unsuccessful result
Despite an honest attempt

It is not digested easily
Many reasons are forwarded readily
It fails to console inner unrest
Despite trying level best

Internal weakness affects so much
It has never stopping crunch
Desire after desire pile
Mind desperately move in for a while

Let us try to be stable
To avoid further troubles
Self contentment may help to great extent
This move is welcome at present


Comments about At Present by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2014 2:09:00 AM)

    t is peaceful mind
    That remains kind
    To keep body
    In tune with harmony (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:28:00 PM)

    Amazing!

    Avery Hopes8 minutes ago
    The style, the message, the rhyme scheme. Everything was perfect. Real talk
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:28:00 PM)

    Good

    Adam Latham7 minutes ago
    I really enjoyed reading this piece...it is so true, it is a peaceful mind that remains kind. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 47,086 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/30/2014 8:54:00 PM)

    we should be bold enough to bear all, good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 8:49:00 PM)

    It is peaceful mind
    That remains kind (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2014



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