I saw this movie
that was about tomatoes
It made me smile
because they rolled around
and killed people
I was eating olives
and I realized
the pimento in the middle
was the same colour
as the killer tomatoes
And I giggled to myself
But then he asked
'what are you laughing at? '
and I just smiled
and poured olive juice down his shirt.
i would add or somehow include this- the pimentos continued to snore. kissing softly is fine...could the last line, however, be a bit less greeting card, a bit more biting? memorable? unexpected?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
K. i fixed it. I agree. Last version was too sappy.