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(January 7,1988 - September 17,2078 / Columbus, OH)

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Your eyes are the colour of water
but it is completely frozen over
and there is no way into your vision
unless I somehow warm you up first
Alas, that is something I can't do
unless you're willing to let yourself go
and press your body against my body
in hopes that the sparks will make a fire
So until our bones lie in the ground
I will have a fire inside of me
and it is burning like Andromeda
just because you aren't here for me
but I wonder, if you come around
will I want to burn for you much more?

Submitted: Thursday, September 01, 2005
Edited: Friday, May 06, 2011


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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (10/17/2007 2:17:00 PM)

    erotic yet, smooching ofcourse, thanks

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  • Sejal Pachisia (9/6/2006 3:51:00 AM)

    haha.. well if this is based on reality, i guess there's only one way for you to find out..

  • Joy Vanderhelm (11/13/2005 11:00:00 AM)

    Such sultry sesuality. Wonderful writing. Keep it up!

  • Vidushi Khera (10/10/2005 3:05:00 AM)

    it's beautiful.....please read Fire In Ice from my collection....kinda fits into the poem! !

    LuV
    VidZ

  • Kelly Allen Vinal (9/2/2005 11:05:00 AM)

    Very nicely done - sensual - keep writing!

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