ants
work night and day
gather foods for rainy days
busy bodies they are
collecting provisions for family
bees are different too
they travel in far places
sucking nectars from plants' stock
and return successfully packed.
arachnids are unique
“She kills he” and eat
oh pity arachnids
they die after they mate
most peculiar are “we”
can share our thoughts suitably
can love... can have freedom
can be the best if we want...
Some people do things with ease, for some people events are hard.
Hi Lady Grace - Nice Poem! 'Ants' 'Bees' 'Spiders' really beautiful specimens of God's craetion we can learn a lot from them! The ANTS work ethic the BEES organisatio and the SPIDERS spinning webs of allurement and intrigue and demonstrating the ultimate in Women's Lib! The poem has excellent structure and flow. The final stanza throws the ball back in our court what are our strengths? 1. Thought sharing - lovely - and a lovely opportunity with PH. 2. Love - that is the raison d'etre of life - to love and be loved.3. Be free - that is our prayer for the whole Human Race. 4. Be the best - YES! However we do have choices - so its up to us to Share - to Love - to be Free - to be the Best - how do you choose? . It is a perfect poem from a lovely Lady so I score it MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.
Beautiful variations in attitude and beautifully penned. In our case the choice swings between Ulusses and Lotus-eaters. CP
I liked this angle of this poem Grace. The creatures you write about so well, all take their part in nature's plan as it is instinctive, and we should too but we also have the choice to do more for humanity than we already do. Well expressed. 10 Karin
Sound different but written well. That's true and beautiful Enjoyed reading it 10+
Excellent poem. Particularly the last stanza: 'most peculiar are “we' can share our thoughts suitably can love... can have freedom can be the best if we want' Ironic how given a choice, some choose hate over love and enslaving others over freedom.10+++
Your clever insight into the insect world how hard they work...busy bodies... Tenacity is the glue we need to keep on the right track..like your thoughts on the subject ++++10 regards
eautiful comparison of life styles and struggles of tiny creatures like ants and bees with humans. We are the best!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Humans fight..they break each other hearts Maybe animals are better than us.. good write