lady grace


The Wedding - Poem by lady grace

i wake up early dawn
to witness the changes in sky
from darkness to morn
for a new bride tonight..

the pain is still here
with sadness and anger
today may be the end
tomorrow is never a fine..

this man who'll be my groom
is as good as Homer
a monster from the north
captured me as his lover..

i never love this man before
but he never let me go
he give me no freedom
only to find..i love him too....

for all those days of confusions
my hours filled with loneliness
all i see is his perfect love
a true love which is always the best...

perhaps it's just a fair
to think that i am a bride to be
morning comes with no illusion
a celebration for wedding anniversary..

and as the ceremony starts
my eyes filled with tears
he is lying in white satin
while everybody stands with me...

today...as we celebrate our anniversary
no other words i can say
i love you so much
'happy silver wedding anniversary'


Comments about The Wedding by lady grace

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (4/24/2010 4:45:00 PM)

    Well happy annivery indeed...
    good write (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    wake up early dawn
    to witness the changes in sky
    from darkness to morning light
    for a new bride tonight..yes and reminds of olden days and sweet memeories to be cherished.... lovely poems with clear hear and feelings....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie James James (6/27/2009 12:44:00 PM)

    not only the hearts screwed up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Salu Salu (6/21/2009 3:39:00 AM)

    you simply make magic in writing.....so vividly narrates..and you had all the hearts screwed up................
    salu. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 990 Points Sadiqullah Khan (6/16/2009 5:24:00 AM)

    You are already a star, grace, what if we comment or not, still the joy of reading this piece was immense.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raghavan Warrier (6/16/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. I wonder how many thousands of poems are already written on the subject of love. But this haunting piece (with a touch of feeling similar to 'Wuthering Heights') with contrasting imagery and an unexpected ending convinces me that beautiful poems can still be written by a highly creative mind. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    A great poem where in the human emotions are expressed with out any inhibitions. Kudos. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,477 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/15/2009 4:42:00 AM)

    I celebrate my fiftieth wedding anniversay on th 20th of this month.Sometimes marriage is very hard. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (6/15/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    The end of the story surprise me in sadness, it's like a real piece which i saw with my own eyes, tks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 337 Points Rafique Farooqi (6/14/2009 10:51:00 AM)

    it is beautifully written....earlier it looked a dream but you told it is real, at morning.....at the end it shaked me....omg....
    leaving movie like imprint on my imagery.... great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vibhu Ashok (6/14/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vibhu Ashok (6/14/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    You Know I never write a poem keeping in my mind the rules of litrature, Like you I always write what my heart says, its really gud meet a person who writes in same way.Very touching poem, flow of time is like that only, we cant realise how much time is being spent How much we love a person, until and unless time of departure comes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~Crystal Midnight~ (6/13/2009 5:34:00 PM)

    oh my gosh... wow... if this is real I am sooo sorry its beyound words can tell you. this left me speachless.
    ~MC~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Irene Umulisa (6/10/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    This is a good poem. However whereas i did understand the message behind the poem, the flow of the poem was a little confusing. Think there were also a few issues with regard to diction. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2009 4:50:00 AM)

    the pain is still here
    with too much sadness and anger
    today may be the end
    tomorrow is never a fine..

    ... the painful departure always upsets us and particularly on silver wedding anniversaaaary........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Keegan Coutriers (6/9/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    Shame, hope it's not based on personal experience? If it is, my condolences.
    Love the contrasting flow of the poem and the end of it was just shocking (a good shock) .
    Grammatical structuring & use of words are very important. The idea behind the poem was wonderful. Good read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephen Stirk (6/8/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    A very very poignant piece, written
    with such love and emotion. Such
    angst and suffering. I felt a lot
    during this moving poem.
    Best
    Steve (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Daniel Hooks (6/8/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    is this poem about slavery to your husband I thought this poem was good but I wander just at what you, ve gone through..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,539 Points Marieta Maglas (6/8/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    ''i never love this beast ever since
    but he never let me go

    all i see is his perfect love
    a true love which is always the best.''
    I think it's about how it is perceived the perfection and the relationship between man and woman. Without love nothing is possible. Love aims to relieve suffering and can not agonize... loved......that is so sad...but a good poem..10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caitlyn Bauer (6/8/2009 2:57:00 AM)

    aww that is so sad i never expected it..

    good show :)

    5stars (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 8, 2010


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