Mehreen Mujeeb

Rookie - 20 Points (4th November 1993 / Lahore, Pakistan)

Autumn - Poem by Mehreen Mujeeb

Pieces of twigs bullet across
They pierce through the air
The breeze snatches leaves
The orange sky breathes through bare trees.

The fire burns down trees
Another tree is shot
Another tree bleeds
The breeze snatched burnt leaves.

The man tears leaves off
One by one they parachute
Their green tears rust on the ground
The trees are stripped naked.

Who said only in autumn leaves fall?

Comments about Autumn by Mehreen Mujeeb

  • Freshman - 619 Points Niamat Ali Murtazai (3/3/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    The breeze snatches burnt leaves' a good expression for autumn. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ushna - (5/30/2010 8:30:00 AM)

    'Who said only in autumn leaves fall? ' i like it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (10/8/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    Tragic type of fall-In Viet Nam Agent Orange brought early falls (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 12, 2010

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