Autumn Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Autumn

Rating: 4.9

The prevailing wind teases
And circles the trees
The multicolor leaves
Fall ever so gently and sway
Like low flying butterflies
Brown, red, yellow
Orange and purple
Against the dark brown soil.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 October 2023

Autumn nicely put. Good allegory

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Nabakishore Dash 02 October 2023

Excellently written Autumn picture Mam.

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2023

Like low flying butterflies...... wonderful write....thank u so much.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 October 2023

Wonderful description of a beloved season TFS Rose-marie

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Rebecca Navarre 03 October 2023

Oh, So Wonderful painted like a beautifully sweet dream! .. Awesome! ..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

To my favourite with top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

Dear friend Rose, this poem is delight both to the eyes to visualise and to the heart. Loved the colourful leaves.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2024

A fascinating account of the leaves in varied colours - brown, red, yellow, orange, purple, fluttering like butterflies in the breeze.

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Aufie Zophy 06 January 2024

Very well written; the reader sees the beauty in his mind while reading these verses.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 November 2023

Excellent poem. Thanks for posting.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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