Banish Me Poem by Neela Nath Das

Banish Me

Rating: 5.0


Banish me from your world,
as I could give you only scream.
We couldn't make a love-circle,
draw a line between our dream.
We could have walked at least a mile
enjoying secs in natural scene,
without hatred, love and smile,
we would later turn friends had been.
I know, we won't hate each other
if we happen to meet by chance.
and casting your look at me rather,
you will rise from your acute-trance.
Banish me, as you have thousand fans.
They will shower on you their love.
I shall watch your dance and prance,
For me my past with you is enough.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

Another raw emotional gush. Love it Hari

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 July 2013

A beautiful thought of resignation to the lost love but still holding to the past! Nice poem!

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R.j. Wynn 21 July 2013

I think we all relate to this message and if not. Whst a shame.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 July 2013

For me my past with you is enough What a great way to express deep love! Nice poem. Thank you.

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David Wood 15 July 2013

Banish me from your love seems a bitter pill taken from experience. An enjoyable poem.

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Patricia Grantham 13 July 2013

I love this one Hari. Banish me from your love and I shall find another treasure trove. Love stops but life goes on.Good write.

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