Neela Nath


Banish Me - Poem by Neela Nath

Banish me from your world,
as I could give you only scream.
We couldn't make a love-circle,
draw a line between our dream.
We could have walked at least a mile
enjoying secs in natural scene,
without hatred, love and smile,
we would later turn friends had been.
I know, we won't hate each other
if we happen to meet by chance.
and casting your look at me rather,
you will rise from your acute-trance.
Banish me, as you have thousand fans.
They will shower on you their love.
I shall watch your dance and prance,
For me my past with you is enough.


Comments about Banish Me by Neela Nath

  • Freshman - 667 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (7/24/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    A beautiful thought of resignation to the lost love but still holding to the past! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/21/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    Exceptional write with rememberances / flashes of some of your past power poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/21/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    I think we all relate to this message and if not. Whst a shame. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,722 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/15/2013 5:19:00 PM)

    For me my past with you is enough
    What a great way to express deep love! Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 3:10:00 PM)

    Banish me from your love seems a bitter pill taken from experience. An enjoyable poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (7/13/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    I love this one Hari. Banish me from your love and I shall
    find another treasure trove. Love stops but life goes on.Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/12/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    Another raw emotional gush. Love it Hari (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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