Barrack No.69 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Barrack No.69

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His innocent eyes are void of hate
Searching for a place to play
He is still wondering!
Why they are living here in Barrack No.69
What happened to their luxurious house?
With a big swimming pool
And the sprawling lawn well maintained
With a swing in center
Resting on the two pillars
Made of teak wood and
Where are those colourful birds?
Who must be giving them the seeds?
And that little dog, jumping from
One wall of the pool to the bench nearby
My-my where have they vanished?
Who took our antique furniture?
And my bookshelf with so many story books
We have nothing here, Mom?
Why Dad is limping and sitting in a corner?
What wrong we did, why are we punished?
So many innocent questions,
Without realizing that they are refugee now
Living in a camp, driven away from home
Far from motherland yet
Earth is not hesitant to accept them
But the people who live there are reluctant
They do not want them to come and live
Life with them, they fear that they might
Take away their jobs, their peace and eventually
Their happiness, this poor boy, born with a silver spoon
Is now at their mercy, trying to catch up with the life
Mom, says learn by heart the address of this new place
And repeat it again and again, say barrack No.69……..

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,refugee,refugees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S H 28 July 2020

Class poem Asim,10+

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Rajnish Manga 08 September 2016

I agree with every single word written by Susan Williams. The narrative surrounds a refugee family which used to be well off and was accustomed to a lavish life-style some time back. The travails of the family- particularly that of a young boy- have been diligently portrayed. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. So many innocent questions, Without realizing that they are refugee now Living in a camp, driven away from home

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Susan Williams 23 July 2016

The last two lines of this poem are heart-rending.... it is not so much that they lost a beautiful expensive home but that they lost the pets, the books, the sense of security and safety and now the live in a barrack that is numbered 69 as a way to distinguish it from all the others, it is a barren place to live, no pets, , no books, no toys, and the father has been harmed and how can he work now.... and they can only tell their living space from others by a number. Very moving poem, well-written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2016

Who took our antique furniture? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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