i love this one
hands abend a knee, battle love
cutting hair
I love this one, never will i let you go.
Enimie ty to take it away.
My eyes are flashing
Burning eyes, burning
Sounds comming out of this burning mouth.
My eyes now are gold.
Standing, but kneeling
Dead, lieing there
this last battle cry
I hug the one i love with a smile.
Battle Love
A bitter-sweet poem, nicely worded. Keep on writing. Best Wishes.
Very lovely, Anna, very sentimental, well penned, keep it up! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dead, lieing there this last battle cry I hug the one i love with a smile. Battle Love...being soldier, i know what the battle love is... beautifully craftd poem and it has touched my heart... i thoroughly loved it...10 read mine...i miss.... mary to marry... miss i miss u