(dedicated to Chelsie Rausch)
You have some new ideas in mind
Now is the time to put them into action
Whether it’s in a friendship or romantic
Walk up and introduce yourself
You feel the need for fresh air
No matter what the weather’s like
You need to boost energy levels
What better way then an openness
(inspired by Debussy’s Feux d'artifice)
Beautiful poem written...Nice meaningful theme! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
You are indeed talented! No doubt. This would be a beautiful song but it's already great as a poem! Do read some of mine especially a new one, 'Perjuangan Kita'. I really salute u! Perfect 10.. MIMI
Yes! One has to be brave to face the challenges of life and succeed! A good message!
Ahamad, this is very good advice, we need to be fearless in our resolve.
yeah we need to be awake and alive..............well penned
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poems are very much thought provoking and inspiring too.