hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Be Known - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Be known not by good family
But by deeds and nobility
That shall carry you very far
In the hearts of people as shining star

You might have been celebrated
At the time of birth and felicitated
For filling the void in rich circle
And taken as good omen on arrival

Your hands were wide open
You brought nothing with you but cried all of sudden
To remind family members about your entry
With the blessings and grace from almighty

Legend says “no one carries permanent name”
Work in such a way that there won’t be any blame
People will praise your nobility and good work
There will be honest rating for your words too

Such kind of people prove their worthiness
People may praise right on the face
Their name will be spread all over
That is how person should thrive forever


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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2014 9:34:00 PM)

    Gibz Rising likes this.

    Gibz Rising beautiful
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2014 9:26:00 PM)

    I like this a lot!


    Kristen Maxwell15 minutes ago
    I love how it tells a story and has emotions in it, too! And your vocabulary is fantabulistic! (I make up my own words.... but that is a compliment) :) Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Be known not by good family
    But by deeds and nobility (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 28, 2014


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