hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,791 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Be Lenient - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I kept mum and remained silent
Preferred to remain calm and absent
"It is right time " I observed
He was loosing nerves and got tired

I understood his logic
His mind was not static
With little failure he was loosing mind
Always shouting and unkind

It had become his nature
We knew it for sure
There was no point in answering
In rage, he was always shivering

After few days he may feel guilty
Come to me and apologize with pity
I offer nothing but little smile
And embrace him with my style

Such is human behavior
You should never loose honor
Be firm but lenient
Alert and present


Comments about Be Lenient by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    A great poem with a message. Agree with what you've said Mehtaji in the last stanza. Such people deserve our sympathy.



    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India
    Jun 21,2014 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2014 8:31:00 PM)

    agitated minds

    KR BALAKRISHNAN10 hours ago
    How to treat them. Good poem. Mehta ji...
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  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    nice


    drkgbalakrishnan kandangath10 hours ago
    advice
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  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2014 8:29:00 PM)

    Good Awsome

    Sneha Barua10 hours ago
    Awesome writing piece. Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/19/2014 12:11:00 PM)

    Sometimes keeping mum is the better approach to take. Interesting write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,791 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    I kept mum and remained silent
    Preferred to remain calm and absent (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 19, 2014



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