Lyn Paul

Veteran Poet - 3,713 Points (17.03.1965)

Be Proud.... Stand Tall!


Believe in who you are. Stop looking for mistakes
Only you are searching. Making your own heart ache
We punish ourselves today, yet tomorrow we ask why?
Why we put ourselves through this?
Making ourselves cry.
The heartaches of today. Are all that they are
Tomorrow they are gone. And you realise just how far
How far. How long and what you have learnt upon the way
What once seemed hard. Is now as clear as day
As clear as day
As clear as light
As clear as the moon
On a heavenly night
So remember the clear will come to us all
Just accept WHO you are
Be proud...Stand TALL!

We can not share wisdom for it is earnt
How beautiful life is; when you see what you have learnt.



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013
Edited: Sunday, May 04, 2014

Topic of this poem: Believe


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just look back and see what you have achieved. Be proud
WE DON'T NEED THE HIGH HEELS

Comments about this poem (Be Proud.... Stand Tall! by Lyn Paul )

Enter the verification code :

  • Veteran Poet - 4,016 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/1/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    Kudos to all the poets who have commented here. You have only strengthened the poet's call by your words of wisdom. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,016 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/1/2013 10:45:00 AM)

    Absolutely marvelous! If there were ways, I would have given this poem more than 10, but since it's not possible to do that, just 10/10.
    The poem is truly inspiring. Those who are passing through low, will certainly feel high after reading this poem. The last stanza is simply a piece of gem.
    The note boosts the low morale. WE DON'T NEED THE HIGH HEELS- what a wonderful way of saying so! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/24/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    life is built on a pyramid, one layer at a time.
    no I am not proud of yesterday's accomplishments .
    only today's count.
    Pride is a backseat arrogrance, while I am driving from the front seat.
    Let me never be satisfied, because I will have turned into old.
    Let look into the rising sun, if it blinds me, it's warmth I will not scold. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Shalini Samuel (8/23/2013 6:06:00 AM)

    you are motivating us to stand tall with our wisdom..thankyou Lyn.. do read my poems and drop in your votes and comments (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,543 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/22/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    As clear as the moon
    On a heavenly night
    Just accept WHO you are
    Be proud...Stand TALL!
    Life is beautiful. So is your poem. So is your message. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Dee Corpolongo (8/22/2013 7:47:00 AM)

    Wow....great words to contemplate and read again and again, until it sinks in deep,
    This here poem says it all, and one that I shall keep! Great write, Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,884 Points Hazel Durham (8/20/2013 5:12:00 PM)

    Wonderful and inspiring write with lovely lines, I really enjoyed reading this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (8/20/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    the ending is so marvelous.we just look back.have we really lived our lives?
    felicitation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Alookh (matin) (8/19/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    the title is the poem itself...thank u very much...i feel energetic after reading this poem... i like ur works: D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (8/18/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    Good creed, sometimes we all get a bit bogged down when we don't quite achieve what we set out to do and then question ourselves, but we learn from all endeavours. nice one Lyn, oh, and thanks for the day off.lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 841 Points Unwritten Soul (8/18/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    I am not born as a mountain to be so tall, i am not like ocean who has heart so deep but i am only a person who can change my world as my soul tell...I bare my soul but no one still can see who i am but i dont care of wrong assumption, bad persuasion, i am tall than others because i am born as me...and I am, Unwritten Soul......inspiring thought by u_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,966 Points Valerie Dohren (8/17/2013 1:48:00 PM)

    Well said Lyn, very true - we should all stand tall, the problem is when others are always trying to put you down. Such people are just feeding their own egos at the expense of others, and we should learn to ignore them. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,426 Points Dave Walker (8/17/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    A great poem and so true, we are a nation of people who likes
    to moan, but if we stop and look back our lives have not been that bad.
    Some people spend so much time wanting to be like someone else
    they forget who they are and what they have got. (Report) Reply

Read all 18 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  4. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  5. If, Rudyard Kipling
  6. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  7. Love, Sarah Flower Adams
  8. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  10. A Smile To Remember, Charles Bukowski

Poem of the Day

poet Sarah Flower Adams

O Love! thou makest all things even
In earth or heaven;
Finding thy way through prison-bars
Up to the stars;
Or, true to the Almighty plan,
That out of dust created man,
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. Destroyer and Preserver, hafiz qasim
  2. My Time, Kyle Schlicher
  3. TEACHER, Shachi Kaul
  4. Jackals cleverness., Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
  5. Gibberish, hafiz qasim
  6. Child Of Mine, Kyle Schlicher
  7. My Heart Is Heavy, Kyle Schlicher
  8. Beautiful Dusk, Shachi Kaul
  9. New year, Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
  10. I Am Ready, Kyle Schlicher
[Hata Bildir]