Beatiful Day Poem by jetro danag

Beatiful Day

Rating: 5.0


what a beautiful day to fell the goodness in the air
what a beautiful sunrise different color in the sky
its good to be love by you
oh that love that was given as a gift from heaven above
in my heart in my soul
what a wonderful night with you by my side
what a beautiful moonlight with the stars shining bright

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Jet, Your poem is colored with rhymes. Its a first try and yet a poem almost perfectly done by an expert poet. However, remember the mechanics in writing like the capitalization, the punctuation. It still needed even you use free verse. Congrats.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 October 2011

Every day is a beautiful day, especially when you are with that special one next to you! Beautiful is feelings! Beautiful is your great poetic talent! and so is this well penned write! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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