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Learned poets have said beauty is to enjoy
Like fresh flowers always give you joy
Don't attempt to pluck or destroy
Not to play with it as simple toy
Thing of beauty is joy for ever
Ever lasting and fading never
Liked by eyes and smelt by nose
Fresh fragrance of flower like rose
Is beauty confined to physical appearance?
Does inner beauty find no substance?
Is that look so important and impose?
No matter whether it denies or trust repose?
Beauty not to be taken from sex point of view,
It is acknowledgement of grace and due
What matters most is simple praise and fact?
Leaving behind all games and not to look suspect
Even God is another name for beauty
Universal acknowledgement for kindness but not pity
We al raise out hands for its grace
Meet all with happiness and embrace
There lies beauty in everything around
Happiness and joy everywhere found
This speaks good and seems so sound
Love spell all over relations bound
It may not spread hatred but only brotherhood
It may not confine to area or only neighbourhood
It has its own role to play and not hide
Everything so open and nothing to confide
History may not repeat the bloody wars fought
Beauty has always ruled and cooperation sought
Queens, princess were married for the sake of peace
Not to shed blood but for stability and life at ease
We may not undermine the essence of beauty
Protect it from harm and consider it as duty
Let us praise and preserve it as God's gift
No fight, no tension and with out any rift
hasmukh amathalal
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Saturday, October 24, 2009 |
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Wednesday, July 06, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (Beautiful World
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Kannan G (2/28/2010 9:57:00 AM)
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A beautiful world of verse did you create! Beauty lies in the eyes of those who see. Best wishes. I am a newcomer to this site. I just had a glance through your poems and was highly impressed. In course of time I will take time to read and comment on them. Meanwhile I would like you to know that I have pasted here a collection of my poems on the well known social worker late Baba Amte. I think you would be interested in knowing more about him and his work. I would like you to kindly go through some of them at your convenience, give your valuable comments and help me spread his universal message.
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Amisha Nair (2/8/2010 10:55:00 PM)
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truthful poem...i remembered a story i learnt in my childhood - abt a mom n son. BOth goes for a fair n in the midst the son leaves mom s hand.He meets one gentleman n tells abt his mom that how she looks - beautifully he describes his mom - so this fellow announces for all the beautiful moms pl do come here. but child is unable to find his mom n feels sad....there he sees his mom - n thtt fellow was shocked to see her. in a social point she wud have been described as the most ugly looking female! ! but for the child, thru his heart he sees the beauty of the other heart.....it was nice to read yr many poems...will be back soon to read more....regards
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Cheryl Griffith (1/24/2010 7:39:00 PM)
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I three of your poems including beautiful world, I especially like when you said God is another name for beaty. Your poems are good and carries strong messages. The rhythmis a bit singsong. It feels as if you are focusing on rhyme too rather than using strong metaphor. But they are good generally. I like how you tend to focus on serious issues. Thanks for commenting on my poem I just place a new one and I will appreciate your comments and honesty.
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Jasmine Vapourlove (1/13/2010 8:54:00 AM)
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I can see through in your poem that we have beautiful world in our mind
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Marcella D (1/10/2010 7:33:00 AM)
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that is a most peaceful poem you have there
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JOSEPH POEWHIT (12/10/2009 4:29:00 PM)
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There is much beauty as the backdropp to this life - GOD is all.
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Merna Ibrahim (12/10/2009 8:28:00 AM)
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Yea, God is the greatest and his creations prove every moment his strength and ability on doing everything....I <3 this poem! !
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izzey strange (12/4/2009 4:42:00 AM)
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I love this line 'To cheat one’s own conscience with skilful tact.'
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Rajaram Ramachandran (12/2/2009 9:39:00 AM)
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God has given man everything to live in like good air, good water, good food, etc., but it is the man who pollutes them and makes the life miserable.
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Trinity Bella (12/1/2009 7:36:00 PM)
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luvly. absoulutly wonderfull! ! ♥
10+++++++++++
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