Beauty Poem by Black Mendilouche

Beauty

Rating: 3.8


You were in my dreams again last night
And they were plentiful.

You pulled me close and held me tight
And it was natural.

You kissed my lips and met my gaze
You took me high and left me dazed
And we are beautiful.

(May 2009 plus minor edit)

Saturday, June 20, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 09 March 2010

Loved this piece.Try 'We Are'.

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Frank Bana 28 July 2009

Superb! ! This flows so well...

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Lillian Thomas 27 June 2009

this is well constructed, and tenderly expressed. I think the rhyming and repeating line works well in this poem.

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Sally Carter 22 June 2009

Beautiful and sensitive. I like this very much.

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Paul Hansford 21 June 2009

If I voted, which I don't, this would get 10. Just the right amount of rhyme, just the right amount of repetition, and you stop when you've said it all.

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