Tsira Gogeshvili

Rookie - 15 Points (29.07.1959. / Tbilisi)

* * * Because Of - Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Because of winds,
Because of a rain rest,

Because of a swallow... yet
For that, cannot sits in a nest,

Because, the bridge of rainbow -
Has not disappeared yet as a dream,

I'll sit in the middle of a rainbow,
What to plait by camomiles a crowns.

Comments about * * * Because Of by Tsira Gogeshvili

  • Saadat Tahir Saadat Tahir (5/30/2009 8:54:00 AM)

    nice imagery
    vivid and yet a shade sad..
    nice stuff
    cheers (Report) Reply

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  • Costa Anakiev (5/29/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    Dear Tsira,
    well done. I painted this picture in my mind and liked it.

    P.S. I liked you joke about arithmetic. 'It's difficult for me to count 100, so, I'd better eat you...' (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (5/28/2009 4:45:00 AM)

    Very moving. Your elegant poem deserves much praise.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Antonio Liao (5/24/2009 11:17:00 PM)

    ...because of Tsira.....the meaning of the day is today
    and the essence of tomorrow is to feel each poem
    you've made.....its good start to reflect and a nice day
    to smile with your poem of saying the goodbye of
    what was yesterday.....i like your poem...thank you and
    God bless my friend (Report) Reply

  • Surayya Abbas (5/24/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. Nice to read. (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (5/21/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    nature love that symbolizes humanity............profound poem...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry Is It Poetry (5/21/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    Bronze upon the wall, a crown is....to sparrow watch, feathers soft, eyes keep, inside Hellenise horse....iip (Report) Reply

  • Andrew Blakemore (5/20/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    A nice reflective poem Tsira, a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm Fay Slimm (5/20/2009 11:02:00 AM)

    Plaiting a crown of camomiles sounds lovely Tsira.....10 + ++ from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq Ashraful Musaddeq (5/20/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    'I'll sit in the middle of a rainbow,
    What to plait by camomiles a crowns.'

    Wonderful short soft poem with rich metaphor.
    Your work is always lovely.
    My :) 10 with it. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma C. P. Sharma (5/20/2009 8:59:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery.

    Because, the bridge of rainbow -
    Has not disappeared yet as a dream,
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Poewhit (5/20/2009 6:02:00 AM)

    Sounds like a comfy spot. (Report) Reply

  • LOVEFOOL Aka (5/20/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    Nice write very psychedelic 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Fiona Davidson (5/20/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    As always Tsira this is stunningly beautiful...Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 2, 2009

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