Because You Are Devine Poem by Sandra Feldman

Because You Are Devine

Rating: 5.0


Poetry,
Music, breeze, trees,
Full of melodious leaves,
Sea, Sun, Sky,
Clouds dreaming by.
River waters,
Pregnant with words,
Feeding the Earth,
Flowing the mind.
Guidance, motherly touch,
Flowered Fields,
That we love so much,
Ancient vineyards, reddest wine,
Poetry,
Heart of hearts,
Where life starts,
Eternal love of mine.

Wednesday, July 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 09 July 2016

THIS IS A POEM ABOUT TENDING ONE'S GARDEN, AS VOLTAIRE ARGUED AT THE END OF CANDIDE. I referred to this way of doing good and living right in my comment on one of your responses. Voltaire's thesis is still valid but his explanation of it is dated and unhelpful. YOU and YOUR POEM have found the heart of that thesis. It's about asppreciating the earth for its beauties, other humanbeings for their goodness, and poetry and the arts for their vision. It's a kind of natural supernaturalism (a phrase used by the later Romantic writers in England) . Thanks Sandra for giving us our anthem in our movement to redeem the age before it's too late.

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Susan Williams 07 July 2016

This is wallow-in-the-words gorgeous! ! ! ! Your linkage keeps deepening, strengthening, widening the scope of your images. WoW! ! ! ! Sandra! ! ! ! ! This is awesome! ! ! ! ! You are a divine poet and this poem is a divine poem and we all just got touched by the angel wing of beauty and talent. A THOUSAND times a 10+ +++++++++++ +++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kelly Kurt 06 July 2016

I spend more intimate time with poetry than with anything or anyone else. I understand your words completely

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Wonderful words my friend. Thanks for sharing!

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