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Robert Howard (8/29/2006 2:34:00 PM)
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This is a lovely hymn of peaceful connection with the world.
Robert
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Esther Leclerc (5/3/2006 9:16:00 AM)
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Especially feeling the last line, Lori, but again, your ability to craft words into poetry is amazing.
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Anna Russell (4/29/2006 11:57:00 AM)
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Wonderful food for thought Lori, this is a joy.
Hugs
Anna xxx
PS Thanks for your kind comments.
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Eric Paul Shaffer (1/17/2006 8:23:00 PM)
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Excellent closing lines-the poem opens up into the reader's world with those words. Good work.
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Simone Inez Harriman (1/10/2006 3:11:00 PM)
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'cast my soul up to the sky
for I no longer need it
it was never really mine to begin with'
Love this Lori. Captured my interest immediately. Thank you.
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Jon Lloyd (11/10/2005 10:43:00 AM)
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Nice Lori. I particularly like the way the last line seems to hang in the air...
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Peter A. Crowther (10/20/2005 2:41:00 PM)
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Lovely poem. Sounds more pantheist than Zen but none the worse for that.
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