p a noushad

Rookie - 47 Points (4 may 1971 / pathirippatta, kozhikode, kerala, india)

BEING


Under the curved blue
water flows forever,
cold current
hot current
fresh water into salty water
salty water into more salty water
going up as vapour
coming down as rain
all in the ocean
appearing and disappearing
forming and merging
again and again
ever.

Submitted: Monday, June 02, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, July 10, 2013

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  • Rookie Nazar Malolmuku (9/27/2012 8:53:00 AM)

    dear poet, its so happy to read your poems more and more times.my best wishes to you to become a best poet in the world of poetry..
    nazar malolmuku from Poem Hunter. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (1/10/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    very nice poem a very thiking poem....simple but powerfull.....i like the poem for its flow toooo....please read....the idea of an idea..and whom do i belong to? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fayeda Vanimel (10/7/2011 7:20:00 AM)

    as all other poems of you, this is too indescribable....well done my beloved teacher...fayeda. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saheed P P Puthan Purayil (2/19/2010 12:52:00 PM)

    Hello Noushad Sir,
    My beloved teacher with a smile in his face always!
    I like this poem very much since I am an oceanographer!
    You are wonderfully talking about the hydrological cycle! Salt budget!
    Ofcourse, this an extremely simple way of expressing it! My hats off!
    This poem will be quoted everywhere when i am having a presentation! ! !
    great to see u there! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/19/2009 9:31:00 AM)

    Thoughtful and beautiful wording!
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandhya S N (7/30/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    well penned the flow of vapour and its changes..
    regards
    sandhya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matt Hartwell (5/19/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    Dear poet. i like your poem but sometimes to much imagery and no meaning or feeling in the poem kills the point your trying to get across. other wise i found it very good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (5/15/2009 2:40:00 PM)

    dear poet this is such a nice poem.
    great job
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonathan Horwitz (3/20/2009 3:26:00 PM)

    I like this poem for a lot of reasons. I like that you dare to write about 'Being' ~ and it's not just your ego, it IS being, following a molecule of water ~ like how basic and essential can you get. And there is no judgement, no good or bad, hot and cold yes, flowing, aware, sensuous. And the poem flows, just like being does. Thank You for this gift. I look forward to reading/experiencing more of you poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (11/10/2008 12:09:00 PM)

    Reads like the rebirth of spring. I like your poetry, it gives me wings. Bob (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (9/26/2008 2:21:00 PM)

    Amazingly written poem. The poem's core is its title.What a fantastic thought.
    Thank you very much, sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (9/8/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    I am drawn to the title of your poem which is soul connected. A beautiful feeling after reading your lovely work. Divine sentiments woven in the spirit of your being. Blessings and regards, arya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (8/22/2008 12:47:00 AM)

    ''being''what a great title.it has captivated me.the poem is greater than its title.
    i love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rohan R (6/15/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    Water is precious similar to life. There will be ups and downs. After all
    adjustments it goes on and on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catherine Rica Cosico (6/14/2008 3:50:00 AM)

    All beings have their purpose and cycle to revolved in this life...Such mystery and magnificence, an immense or diminutive loop all comes back where everything started...

    Cate (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (6/9/2008 7:58:00 AM)

    Our perspectives are the product of our environment. This poem is a reflection of that. The writer is seized by water in its manifestations. Since our bodies are
    mostly fluid, he is not misguided in his view of 'Being.'

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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