Jeff Fleischer

Rookie - 15 Points (10/10/69 / Louisville, Kentucky)

Being With You Wasn'T Right - Poem by Jeff Fleischer

Being with you wasn't right,
But it did not stop me every night.
I just kept having all these mixed feelings
As I stared at the four walls and the ceiling.
I knew that your life seemed so unfair.
I want to show you that I cared.
I saw that your broken heart needed mending.
A helping hand, was what I was extending.
You taught me that being kind was something I should do.
That's why I'll always love you.


Comments about Being With You Wasn'T Right by Jeff Fleischer

  • Rookie Dene Lopez (11/5/2010 3:51:00 PM)

    This poem is very true and relatable, I love it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Chloe Young (6/28/2009 6:06:00 PM)

    a very true poem, i like real/true poems

    <3 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/2/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    you write with feeling 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (11/10/2008 9:05:00 PM)

    Good poem of words. Need to, if you are rhyming to contiue with that thought. This was something I was taught early on in my writings. But I loved what you had to say in this piece. God Bless, Linda (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 8, 2011


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