What do you think this poem is about?

Believe in me?

If I told you I tried real hard
would you believe me?
If I spoke to you about how I feel
would you believe me?
If I spilled everything
would you believe me?
If I showed you my dream world
would you believe me?
If I painted my life on a page
would you believe me?
If I danced the dangerous game that I play
would you believe me?
If I never lied once
would you believe me?
If I gave my all
would you believe me?

Why is it that when I give you my only truth you never believe in me?

Submitted: Sunday, May 31, 2009


Comments about this poem (Believe in me? by Angelic Warrior )

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  • Adi Cox (7/10/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    This poem addresses the problems and comlexities of communication in relationships. Sometimes it is impossible to believe someone. If I said 'I am a liar' would you beleive me? This is a paradox. Nice poem.10/10.

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  • Lady Grace (6/14/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    believe in me and trust..believe in me and stay..believe in me and let's enjoy together the life..this is a beautiful poem..grace

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  • sky dreams (6/14/2009 7:44:00 AM)

    this reminds me of my relationship with my father.. very good thoughts expressed very well.10

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/13/2009 12:27:00 PM)

    Thanks for the share of this wonderful piece...this gives much to reflect on...thank you...well penned

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