Best Days Poem by Brie Carter

Best Days

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(a song i wrote)
Every time I look at you
You always look so beautiful
Driving on the road again

And I would take some photographs
So I can dream of you

Can't say I've felt such a twisting in my heart this
way
We get sleeping while you stay awake
so close to you

Do you believe
In love at first sight
I think you do
We're lying naked under the covers
Those are the best days of my life

Can't take away those times
We stayed in bed and talked all night
Chain smokes of cigarettes and
Three bottles of red wine
Falling asleep together
Holding your body close to mine

Oh and in the morning
Your eyes opened so innocent
The sun is blazing we are sweating
You look lovely
Nothing else matters and?
In my arms again

Do you believe
In love at first sight
I think you do
We're lying naked under the covers
Those are the best days of my
Those are the best days of my
Those are the best days of my life

Oh I never wanna be without you
So just stay with me
I will love you endlessly

Oh darling, darling
Those are the best days of my
Those are the best days of my life

Do you believe
In love at first sight
I think you do
We're lying naked under the covers
Those are the best days of my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you are fantastic milady.try to get published! !

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Randy Hogan 03 December 2008

WoW! ! ! ! Very romantic great job i would say a 10 best wishes neighbor from Helen Georgia, If you get time please check out some of my work Please! !

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Iron Man 02 December 2008

You go girl! well done keep writing! ! a10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2008

Very romantic poem. Very good read........and the refrain is too good.

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