Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Betrayals


Only you decide if my life
Is heaven or hell
Only you can save me
No one else
But when you open your eyes
You're still blind to me
But I can't believe
That you won't save me

Submitted: Saturday, January 08, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Betrayals by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski )

  • Rookie Chwayita Betshe (12/14/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    I like this poem it is so straight forward great poem indeed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Connor Whyte (6/18/2012 5:39:00 PM)

    When people refuse and are blind to your meaning then open there eyes and show them with your words, Your words are a very powerful tool to use sometimes they can hurt but and they can make an impact on someone positively or negatively its for you to choose. You can't let others choose for you.
    Very short and very straight to the point what I like in a poem. (Report) Reply

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