Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

A Break Of Tradition - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

My mom can't be bothered with me
Because her boyfriend dumped her
My dad uses me to hurt her
My sister steals all of my things
My other sister tries to beat me up
Over accidents
My last sister makes cruel jokes about me
My brother isn't ever around
My friends ask what's wrong
My friends try to help
My friends actually care
But I'm supposed to think
That family's always there
And friends aren't


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Looking at the comments, I see much concern for me.... To make things clearer, this is a fictional set of circumstances. I was using this poem to prove a point. In no way is this poem a reflection of my life. The speaker is NOT me. Sorry for the confusion!

Comments about A Break Of Tradition by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Silver Star - 3,995 Points Paul Sebastian (5/12/2014 9:03:00 AM)

    Forthright expression of your feelings, well written. I am glad that you spend time creatively instead of letting family life challenges bog you down. You are strong and a purpose-driven person. Keep writing. You are destined to be great! (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Lexus Box (10/7/2013 8:15:00 PM)

    wonderful poem i love it so strong keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 148 Points Kebe Iwara (12/1/2012 7:45:00 AM)

    Hey tiff..that's the paradox of family; they're too fami-liar with you 2 want to look wrinkle-free. That's supposd 2 show that they trust you enough to appreciate them the way they are. So now show them that you care, just so ur friends wudnt stumble upon their slack moments embarassing you as well. So you see ur mirror(eyes) shudnt b as unaesthetic as they may think, only hopeful(that's a lifetime task-the more committed you are the more piquant ur expectation) i'm still expecting ur comment on any of my poems. No matter how brief. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ritty Patnaik (10/30/2012 3:09:00 PM)

    tiffany......i am glad you got started, and i am sure it is going to be better and better as you go! my best wishes for you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 152 Points Robert Roberts (8/17/2012 1:47:00 AM)

    family's always there
    but friends are spares
    cause when things go wrong
    then you see which on belongs

    a good friend is just to calm the nerves not everything we do on our own sometime we can use the help (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Martin O'Neill (6/24/2012 4:45:00 PM)

    You pick friends. Family is a burden or a blessing. As you get older you get to choose. Good luck. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/20/2012 12:10:00 PM)

    hahaha... that's something! (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, December 10, 2012


[Hata Bildir]