Treasure Island

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

(November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Avoidence Is Void


I keep
Diving deeper
And deeper...
To avoid
Facing the
Problems on
The surface...
But the
Further I
Go, the
Faster they
Follow me...
I thought
It was
Done,
That it
Had been
The end...
But it
Seems I
Have only
Opened the
Door
And it's
Only the
Beginning

Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011
Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011

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  • Gabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 6:14:00 PM)

    Brings to mind- The furthur you tunnel away from your problems, the deeper they'll bury you. Good poem. Straight forward. Never shy away from your humility. (Report) Reply

  • Joyce Rugg (6/20/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    This is amazing! The title captures interest, the format is appropriate, and the poem is so true. Nice job! :) (Report) Reply

  • Connor Whyte (6/18/2012 5:36:00 PM)

    Amazing. This is a lot like my poem The Edge is near. Feeling like your falling and lost without help is a hard thing to deal with but it will pass and you have to approach it and stop it. (Report) Reply

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