Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Avoidence Is Void


I keep
Diving deeper
And deeper...
To avoid
Facing the
Problems on
The surface...
But the
Further I
Go, the
Faster they
Follow me...
I thought
It was
Done,
That it
Had been
The end...
But it
Seems I
Have only
Opened the
Door
And it's
Only the
Beginning

Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011
Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011

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  • Rookie Gabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 6:14:00 PM)

    Brings to mind- The furthur you tunnel away from your problems, the deeper they'll bury you. Good poem. Straight forward. Never shy away from your humility. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (6/21/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    Wow, great job I would say! Optimistic thought out of a pesimist (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Rugg (6/20/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    This is amazing! The title captures interest, the format is appropriate, and the poem is so true. Nice job! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Connor Whyte (6/18/2012 5:36:00 PM)

    Amazing. This is a lot like my poem The Edge is near. Feeling like your falling and lost without help is a hard thing to deal with but it will pass and you have to approach it and stop it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/18/2011 2:21:00 PM)

    (Keep Avoidence to Violence
    The best way to get peace)
    A good poem! ! (Report) Reply

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