Better Off... Poem by Dislocated Heart

Better Off...

Rating: 4.5


why must you glue me back together when everything was coming apart?
why did you leave me, from the start?
why would you have stayed by myside when you knew i wasnt the right guy?
why did you have to pretend, when everything went wrong?
why do you put that mask or cover on?
why must you love me so much that makes me want to weep?
why are you by myside helping me?
i dont deserve such thing.
i dont deserve you.
my world is falling apart as you realize that we're not meant to be.
you realize that something has changed..
me or you?
im tryin my hardest to keep and hold on..
taking all the shoots,
taking another fall.
im holding on.
but im barely making it..

you be better off without me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coreena Dejesus 06 March 2008

Very good read and alot of emotion.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

emotional and vivid........

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Emancipation Planz 26 February 2008

Compel to read this to the end... I was better off for it... so just to say - keep writing... there will be many a babe that will want to keep glued to these pieces!

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 25 February 2008

oooh so something did happen to you wat happened? ?

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