hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Bid Good Bye - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Bid good bye

I tried to convince
But not possible, hence
Decided to bid adieu
And search conscience in view

When things urn useless
It must be phased out
New concept must creep in
Old is to kept out

Well, I observed
And may times opted out
But I was pulled in
But in vain

Poems after poems
Go unread in turn
No one can digest
But I am the on who always sticks to best

Yes it is autumn
One may condemn
But I go out with full satisfaction
That I had set n example with relation

It is ungraceful act
When nothing is appreciated in fact
Not even your endeavor
That speaks of dishonor

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Comments about Bid Good Bye by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/21/2014 6:52:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write. Very true said in few lines.....
    I tried to convince
    But not possible, hence
    Decided to bid adieu
    And search conscience in view....Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    Sajan Ahir likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 8:54:00 PM)

    Bid good bye

    I tried to convince
    But not possible, hence (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2014



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