Michelle Dickson

Rookie - 0 Points (August 12,1990 / Denison, Texas)

bigLIVE, smallSUICIDE, bigLAUGH, smallSUICIDE, bigbigLOVE Poem by Michelle Dickson

This is what my thoughts are
I do not have a star
To put in all my hopes
To put in all my dreams
Where will I be without my star.

Before you came
These were my thoughts
But now I am lost.
I do not have these thoughts anymore.
That is whats running through my mind.

I must be insane
Running off cocaine.

These thoughts are brought to mind.
It must be some kind of sign.

To be here with you
And the love that you sew.
I quit the drugs
But brought on the pain.
But it is bearable
As long as I have you to gain.

Nop e, dont need these thoughts no more.
Now I have something to live for.

Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 16, 2011

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  • Rookie Cait Secret (4/24/2011 2:49:00 AM)

    omg! This is brilliant! It's something new from what u normally see. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emma Rogers (9/23/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 OF DA BEST POEMZ IV READ! ! ! ! ! ! ! REALY TOUCHED DA HEART AND WAZ REALI MEANINGFUL :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie H Bharj (2/25/2009 6:23:00 PM)

    cool poem...someting worthliving 4...lfe and love... ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joshua Burckhard (6/3/2008 7:12:00 AM)

    it's a nice lil poem and yeah only if it turned out more like this with people but ya never know i'm glad it worked for you though (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiffany Reeves (4/4/2008 4:01:00 PM)

    i really love this poem.... it is very encouraging and helpful for those who think about suicide (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emo Seb (2/20/2008 2:28:00 PM)

    hey, this is awesome...i like how it's gotta different point of view, going from suicidal to happy, rather than suicidal to dead...refreshing...can't wait to read more!

    O, just a random thing, how crazy is that, your poem says 'LIVE LOVE LAUGH', so does my shirt...just thought i'd share that!
    <^.^> -Seb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bethany M. (1/31/2008 9:07:00 AM)

    interesting point of view..... I really liked it keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Suicide King (12/26/2007 11:44:00 PM)

    Nice title, interesting poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reece Dizon (12/12/2007 8:18:00 PM)

    Nicley Written.
    Angel of Death, Cry At My Side. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie .Kathryn Van Atta (7/23/2007 12:48:00 PM)

    omg, i loved it. i wrote one similer to it aout a year ago. but urs is so much better. its really....true. i dnt know, its a very good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie fallen beauty (6/26/2007 12:36:00 AM)

    This is really cool. It makes so much sense. I like it a lot. (Report) Reply

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