Treasure Island

Michelle Dickson

(August 12,1990 / Denison, Texas)

bigLIVE, smallSUICIDE, bigLAUGH, smallSUICIDE, bigbigLOVE

This is what my thoughts are
I do not have a star
To put in all my hopes
To put in all my dreams
Where will I be without my star.

Before you came
These were my thoughts
But now I am lost.
I do not have these thoughts anymore.
That is whats running through my mind.

I must be insane
Running off cocaine.

These thoughts are brought to mind.
It must be some kind of sign.

To be here with you
And the love that you sew.
I quit the drugs
But brought on the pain.
But it is bearable
As long as I have you to gain.

Nop e, dont need these thoughts no more.
Now I have something to live for.

Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 16, 2011

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  • Emma Rogers (9/23/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 OF DA BEST POEMZ IV READ! ! ! ! ! ! ! REALY TOUCHED DA HEART AND WAZ REALI MEANINGFUL :) (Report) Reply

  • Joshua Burckhard (6/3/2008 7:12:00 AM)

    it's a nice lil poem and yeah only if it turned out more like this with people but ya never know i'm glad it worked for you though (Report) Reply

  • Tiffany Reeves (4/4/2008 4:01:00 PM)

    i really love this poem.... it is very encouraging and helpful for those who think about suicide (Report) Reply

  • Emo Seb (2/20/2008 2:28:00 PM)

    hey, this is awesome...i like how it's gotta different point of view, going from suicidal to happy, rather than suicidal to dead...refreshing...can't wait to read more!

    O, just a random thing, how crazy is that, your poem says 'LIVE LOVE LAUGH', so does my shirt...just thought i'd share that!
    <^.^> -Seb (Report) Reply

  • .Kathryn Van Atta (7/23/2007 12:48:00 PM)

    omg, i loved it. i wrote one similer to it aout a year ago. but urs is so much better. its really....true. i dnt know, its a very good poem. (Report) Reply

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