Black On White. Bingo! ... [creation Fantasy; God's Decisions; Animals; Medium Length] Poem by Bri Edwards

Black On White. Bingo! ... [creation Fantasy; God's Decisions; Animals; Medium Length]

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When God had created fishes for the Sea,
but not yet the roots of Mankind's family tree,
He proceeded to make insects and reptilians,
including snakes, which flicked tongues from their grins.

Amphibians and birds He did make next,
and microbes which sometimes, Man, have vexed.
But with mammals He at times was stumped.
Should camels be one, or two, OR three-humped? ?

He made horses. [Perhaps someday men would ride? ]
He even made one version with a horn on its head (not its side) .
But with His color schemes He was not satisfied.
He wanted a more modern look for one horse's hide.

He thought long and hard about His horse-color plan.
He'd done solid colors already, as He would do for Man.
'How would a 'checkered-board look' look? ' He thought.
For several seconds His churning mind was fraught ……
with circles, triangles, and random splotches of pastels.
[He'd not yet dealt with other issues: sounds and smells! ]

He decided He needed input, so He asked the Sun and Moon;
the latter at Midnight and the former at Noon ……,
when they'd be most active and perhaps more alert.
It might not help His decision-making …. but it couldn't hurt.

The Moon said 'golden crescents upon a pure black background'.
The Sun: 'orange globes on blue, AND white streaks SHOULD abound'.

'Streaks? ' thought God, and His mind churned more.
Finally He decided upon, not crescents or globes, but STRIPES galore!
'Pastels? ' NO, He'd used pastels enough for His 'Unihorn' [sic].
To White and Gray or Black, OR all three ……….. He would stick.

First He tried white stripes on black …..on his sketching pad,
but it wasn't quite the exact vision that God had had.
The next step seemed obvious, and He drew black stripes on white,
and THIS TIME what He saw (on his paper) seemed oh so RIGHT.

(January 17, 2015)

Saturday, January 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,god,animals,design
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ok! now i see PH has added 'Form' to our choices. it seems there are 'tons' of poem 'forms' i've never even heard of! oh well. i hope i don't HAVE TO KNOW what MY poems are. they just are. as for this poem, it once was just going to be called 'Black On White-2' and be, like my 'Black On White; OOPS! ' a possible entry into January's ACTC POEM CONTEST, run this month on my site [see my 'poem' starting 'ACTC: 2015/01' for details].i don't happen to believe in God, but i believe it has its place, as in an explanation of how everything (except God!) came to be in existence. yes, some might say i'm poking fun at God (god forbid! ! !) and/or people who DO believe in God. but i'm just trying to amuse, NOT abuse. forgive me, PLEASE, if you are offended, and i'll forgive YOU for being offended. deal? good! bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 21 May 2023

Since the human mind demands explanations, there's no harm in playfully delivering one to us. Mythic stories may have a grain of truth, because they are drawn up from deep in the well of imagination.

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Valsa George 18 January 2015

One thing I must admit at the outset..... You haven't abused God in any way, but only tried to amuse everyone! This poem is quite different from your usual stuff.... but don't know how far it can amuse! Any way an interesting write where you have stretched your imagination to limitless heights and also strained to have the rhyme scheme perfect!

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Bri Edwards 21 May 2023

Oh, Valsa, my 'child', so kind and so mild, I thank you for so much and wish we could keep in touch, but, alas, PH you have fled to sites you less dread. ;)

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