Bloodlust Poem by Carl Carl

Bloodlust



What is this feeling
This feeling inside me
I want to kill
Killing is fun
I want to murder
I want to torture them
They hurt me
I must make them pay
Pay for what they did to me
They will die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.

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