Heather Burns


Blowing In The Wind - Poem by Heather Burns

Standing with arms
outstretched toward
heaven

leaves catch the sun
casting reflections

silver images dance
on their surface

branches hover together
creating an umbrella
of protection

listening to secrets
borrowed from the wind

whisper in my ear
share with me the magic
blowing in the wind.


Comments about Blowing In The Wind by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 6,168 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (10/12/2014 6:20:00 PM)

    A winning windy write my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (10/11/2014 2:41:00 PM)

    A Beautiful write Heather. That's the beauty of wind which carries some secrets in air. We have to give a lending ear to hear the secrets it carries....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,976 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/11/2014 2:49:00 AM)

    A thoughtful poem, We always get something when we look upwards. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/1/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    pictorial view of the poem superb the lovely style of Heather..as if supplicating.. morning with hope stood in front of the individual whole poem is symbolic leaves, silver image, branches, umbrella..lovely Heather I salute your art kudos (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,998 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/30/2014 1:55:00 PM)

    whisper in my ear
    share with me the magic
    Secrets of the universe are floating in space. Ear craves to pick the vibrations. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,090 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/30/2014 10:50:00 AM)

    I like the simplicity of your diction. You are able to incite passion in your readers by using few words. Thats good. keep writing, I like this one. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 8:51:00 AM)

    whisper in my ear
    share with me the magic... nice one....10

    share
    and take care
    to blow gently
    and happily (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,943 Points Paul Sebastian (9/29/2014 3:04:00 AM)

    A beautiful picture of spring, the unfolding beauty in the wind! Great write. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (9/28/2014 11:57:00 PM)

    Yes all day through trees outstretch their arms towards heaven and pray for mankind and wind is a witness to
    all these divine things..............Heather.......very nicely composed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 28, 2014



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