Break Poem by Louisa Dai

Break

Rating: 5.0


I dropp my heavy footsteps into a bar.

Cool air pierces my weary bone.

Ice cream is melting

To quench my thirst scorching.

I watch the road-passers baked by sun.

Their hasty paces beat a heavy metal song

And echo the screams of apple and pineapple.

I sip clearness of fruit as drug pill.

Like in the presser a fresh apple,

I come out of bar to be thawed

In the hustling-bustling road.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 August 2010

I sip clearness of fruit as drug pill. Like in the presser a fresh apple, ....v. good imagination.. carefully worded poem.......10

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