Breakdown Poem by Sad Truth

Breakdown

Rating: 5.0


I open my eyes
And realize
I was never...
There!

I supose we
Were...Happy!
But I know
It wasnt true!

Why cant I
Close my eyes
Again
And hold you close?

I breakdown...
Screaming!
I breakdown...
Bleeding!

Tell me you... love me
Tell me you... care
I stay awake all night
Wishing you were...here!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 20 July 2009

filled with passion and depth. 'i breakdown screaming i breakdown bleeding' those lines grabed me.... loved it

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Very nice i love the poem all in one this is a 10 When you get time can you read a few of my poems especially the one called: 'A DREAM' thank you and God bless

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