Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 714 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Breakfast - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Life at the moment
is like weak tea,
unimpressive
and strained like me.

I've tried it with sugar,
I've tried it without,
both are insipid
and lend no clout.

Give me some whisky
to top it up.
I'll toast the days bite
with the strength in my cup.


Comments about Breakfast by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Rookie Samantha Wallace (3/1/2012 1:38:00 AM)

    Ha! Ha! Good one Sally. Reminds me of the saying Whining makes me turn to wine! ! :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kevin Halls (7/14/2011 4:37:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, short and bittersweet, nice one Sally.Bit like my tea! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/27/2010 11:28:00 AM)

    Whisky will ward off husky life…lolol
    Vintage and vantage
    10/10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/18/2010 11:48:00 PM)

    this only proves that life can be related to all the things in the world even as simple as breakfast..... nice write here! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (10/6/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    a poem that flows with such ease, Sally...love the poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hari Khabrani (5/1/2009 12:28:00 PM)

    Ill health and is the tea test. Wine and dine, the dawn in. Wish you a good day, with own wishes of health. Carry on as long as life permits....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points nomad omnia (4/26/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    This is vintage Sally! N (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 14, 2011


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