keeping a day ahead when
space occupied by those
preceding still reeks of
waste is deemed vagrancy
and planning non-events
because your life depends on
it does not explain why no
demand exists in any case
living in expectancy of a
life-changing phone-call
doesn’t bring order to the
chaos surrounding you, so
unleash suspense, be an
angel freed of tyranny
leave the mess, hide the
phone, breathe again
© 25 January 2010, I. D. Carswell
living in expectancy of a life-changing phone-call doesn’t bring order to the chaos surrounding you, so chaos everywhere, wise write
a poem that makes good sense of how to break free? yes from tyranny! .....................superbly written.
A beautifully conceived meaningful poem and a pleasure to read. Congrats for composing such a nice poem and it's being poem of the Day too.10 points.
unleash suspense, be an angel freed of tyranny leave the mess, hide the phone, breathe again Beautiful poem. Nicely written. 10 for it. Subhas
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Be an angel free of tyranny! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.