Breeze Poem by Elias Uddin

Breeze

Rating: 5.0


A breeze softly stirs
Petals of flowers and hearts
To shed gloom and mires.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laughing@ You 31 March 2014

Beautiful. Haiku is very difficult to write and requires a lot of discipline to do well. Your images are perfect and your voice is loud and clear - even in form. Nice work, Elias.

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Motasim Billah 19 February 2014

nice writing. liked the poem

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Mohammad Zafar 16 February 2014

I visualize being stired by a gentle breeze!

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