At the bar
The music moved me
Till my paycheck was gone
Out and about
New clothes, new shoes
Till my paycheck was gone
At the casino
Won once, got hooked
Till my paycheck was gone
That bridge...
Between, your Vice and Obsession
Between Reason and Folly
Between the Beauty and the Beast
That bridge to nowhere
Do not cross it...
Else you fall
The only thing you left out of the bridge was Sarah Palin, excellent write.
Do not cross it... Else you fall Good touch of subconscious. Bridge is nowhere, only between subconscious to conscious.Sometimes it comes to reality when the paycheck was gone. Beautiful metaphor. Applied intelligence win overs the emotions. Do not cross it / Else you fall. Yet bridge is somewhere and it carries us from unreal to reality. Thank you. Write more... Regards, 10+ pranab
awesome poem i like it because its describing the many vices that all of mankind has n it makes one stop and think bout the things one does
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice the words just float. Love the subject its so true. Really well done write.