(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Bright Flame

My love, my love, no scented flower
Could smell so sweet there in my bower -
No stars could yet adorn the night
Nor sun, nor moon, e`er shine so bright
As that which brings me love`s delight

For that which brings me love`s delight
Shines forth from you to feed my sight -
A love that never shall depart
A tender longing to impart
Bright flame that burns within my heart

Bright flame that burns within my heart
O let us not be set apart -
Stay close my love, a vigil keep
Upon my soul, which slumbers deep
So deep as in eternal sleep

So deep as in eternal sleep
That I no more shall ever weep -
O love that shines within your eyes
A love that neither wilts not dies
A love that nothing e`er denies

A love that nothing e`er denies
The greatest gift, the greatest prize
That I shall cherish through all time
Shall so extol as bells that chime
My love for you is so sublime

My love for you is so sublime
That nought there is I could not climb -
You are the angel by my side
Forever there shall you abide
My light, my heart, my flowing tide

My light, my heart, my flowing tide.....

Submitted: Sunday, July 08, 2012
Edited: Saturday, October 20, 2012


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  • G.R. Gaus (5/5/2013 11:03:00 PM)

    Indeed, the brightest of flames is true love, shared only by two, perfecty expressed.......

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/17/2012 8:32:00 PM)

    love the rhyming..very creative and imaginative.. :)

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  • Dee Corpolongo (9/16/2012 2:13:00 AM)

    Another greatly expressed poem that almost reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's Annabel Lee
    It is THAT good as all your poems. Thank you for sharing such beautiful feelings.

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  • John Brown (8/19/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    I've read a few of Valerie's poems now, and not found a poor one yet. This is great too.

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  • Ken E Hall (7/21/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    A flame I'm sure will never dim, always a delight to read such poems what else can top this when it is wrote..by a master thank you...regards

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  • Dave Walker (7/14/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, really like it, a great write.

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/14/2012 2:38:00 AM)

    Bright flame that burns within my heart
    O let us not be set apart -

    very concerned lines and interesting to read! Good!

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  • Elna Nel (7/13/2012 3:38:00 PM)

    so beautifully soft and romantic, well done!

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  • Juan Olivarez (7/13/2012 9:44:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. your work so reminds me of the greats Dickinson, milay, Browning, outstanding always.

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  • Valsa George (7/13/2012 6:51:00 AM)

    Perfect rhyme scheme......ardent love theme......enjoyed it much! !

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