Broken Poem by Carla Nestoros

Broken

Rating: 5.0


Try me?
If you really want to
The depth of your eyes are black
And you don't hold me like you used to

Painful? Try me.
I'd do anything for you
Anything to keep you
Nothing that i wouln't do

I long for you, your touch
Your closeness haunts me
It's taunting me
Brazen anger 'cause you turn away

I beg for your smile
When i get it, it lingers over me, controls me
And i can't stop what i want to be
Or what i want...for us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 14 August 2008

love yet intense reasons blue ire when breaths glowers the reeks.........................wonderful imagery of love that happens to happen between the lover and belioved, when uncontrolled.well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tanya Stanford 14 August 2008

Your partner needs to appreciate you. If not move on. Brillian poem. Love the emotions and free flowing word use.

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