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wendi Collier

(3-23-93)

broken heart 3


Broken heart
I cry only at night because I don’t want you to know I hurt
I try and I try to get you out of my mind but nothing ever works
I try to replace you but it only makes things worse
We broke up over something stupid
Now I try to stay muted
Because I know if I say the wrong thing
It will change every thing
My heart is broken
I’m really hurting
And I don’t know what to do
My friends tell me to talk to you
But every time I go to I feel like you don’t want to
Maybe when this is all over
We will get back together
But for now I guess I just have to suffer

Submitted: Friday, January 09, 2009
Edited: Sunday, January 11, 2009

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  • Shekhar Joshi (5/28/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    ok so seems like u r waiting for it to get over....and how will that happen...
    listen it can happen onlt when u both talk..no other way.

    good luck

    a sad poem but written well (Report) Reply

  • Zachary Clark (3/12/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    Interesting in touch with your feelings yes you are.
    You are hurting yes you are.
    You are mature yes you are.
    All I have to say is I hope the best for you finding the one.
    I also love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Carol Rhodes (1/9/2009 7:03:00 PM)

    Wendi, this is great. Filled with passion, honesty and many things we all recognize and share with you. Yes, we all had 'beginnings' and 'endings', but lots of life left to go and many more hills to climb. May you find your special one. Don't be in a hurry. Get to know yourself first and the space next to you should fill and compliment you nicely ere long, yes? My best, Carol (Report) Reply

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