A mirror was accidentely
broken
shattered into hundreds
of pieces
crying!
looking for one single
fragment
lost in the shifting
desert sand.
Beautiful poem..If broken leaves one shattered never to be mended..Loved reading it. Thank you Heather for the Inspiring comments that fills positivity in me...Thanks a lot.
Sand is where the mirror came from. To sand it goes. One single piece. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
I like your line breaks and dropped lines. The broken phrases really echo and portray the theme in a very effective way. Well done!
I do very much like the feel of this poem, it has the spirit of Imagist poetry all through it. Very intriguing!
i like to compare the broken mirror with that of broken heart n the consequence thereof. a beautiful write.
Event brought us at the desert.... yeah here u r Heather thank you
Full of symbolism in few words. The mirror, the crystal that broken (i presume) , the lost heart, the lost identity....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mirrors show us who we really are. Have you read my poem Mirror?