'Broken Mirror' Poem by Whitney Nicole Albright*

'Broken Mirror'

Rating: 5.0


I walked into my room and slammed the door
The mirror fell onto the floor
So frustrated, I my head shook
I turned around to give it a look
Something so beatiful was shattered
In so many pieces, it is scattered
Next, I sat on bended knee
I saw the broken parts of me
I tried to put it together sighing
As I cut myself trying
It would have been better to have left it alone
Then to hurt myself trying to fix it wrong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 28 June 2009

Beautifully written Whitney, Breaking a mirror can show the inside of your soul so vividly. Your wording was straight from the heart.10++

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You write with the voice of a true poet in this poem...

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 October 2008

Fabulous. The last line goes so deep...... Really a masterpiece. Thank you very much.

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Asif Andalib 26 September 2008

A masterpiece. I am falling in love with your poems.10

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