jerry hughes

Freshman - 1,070 Points (January 4,1931 / a citizen of the world)

BUBBLES


See them rise, float away and gently burst.
Innocently the child blowing them didn't know
he was creating a perfect metaphor for life.

Submitted: Thursday, November 29, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

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  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (4/23/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    I love this seeing that I wrote a poem for my children called 'bubbles'. Light bubbles but deep water Jerry! You're a bubble of wisdom. Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amie-Lee ...... (2/25/2008 10:19:00 PM)

    Short, but sweet. Good work. I have to agree with my darling friend Allie.......perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (12/6/2007 6:54:00 PM)

    Sometimes you touch the soul of life with a feather. This is beautiful. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (12/2/2007 1:33:00 PM)

    I love the depth of this Jerry, the transient image of the floating bubbles, the innocence of the child - and finally, the bubbles gently bursting. A delicately crafted yet deeply profound piece of poetry. Justine xx (Report) Reply

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