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Abhinit Chute (abz)

(23/7/1996 / Nagpur)

Burning with thoughts

Though I'm a superconductor, I feel electric field inside,
I was like frost, but now I feel like I have kept the stuff aside..
And I know what's it so I let them earphones kill...
I'm sick of that red silk and my eyes wanna see her reveal..

I'm one of those mental threats got to shocked up with thrill..
If you ever got ill, call this duster-spunk, that's a good deal..
Put up in a spider web, between two giant web stars..
I won't give up though, I will swallow those mega sharks..

Nowadays I'm getting so much study oriented..
Twist me or make me turn, I end to this state again ended..
But my brain is under the cave, that lioness tongues it..
Took my heart and now my brain's chewy enough, she wants it..

I went through meditation process, but it didn't have an effect..
As they say, though they don't pray, my spine is not erect!
A fan of shady, the whole day's just eminem madness,
But that bugs bunny doesn't let me off from 'summertime sadness'

I'm sick of these capacitors, though i love these resistances..
No talk from fifteen days, how come I'm handling circumstances..?
I never need while sleeping counting those sheeps and goats..
And never I know when I'm dead in those burning deep thoughts....

Submitted: Saturday, September 21, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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