Lonely Poem by Abhinit Chute (abz)

Lonely

Rating: 5.0


It's a damn hot day, and i'm sitting there..
I'm alone, but my mind's else somewhere..
The metre bulb is glowin', there's no power-cut..
I can't imagine how can i resist an 'All Fans Shut'? !

Being addressed by a girl in a few hell words..
Oh, It's killin' my mind; I can't solve even surds..
You're in my dreams; I see u even in coffee cups..
'I'm defeated, I quit, ' sadly says The Damn-edged AbZ..

Is it real that they say 'Love is totally Blind'?
Yeah, I'm so beaten up but atleast I'm kind..
It's harsh but true to regret, being the mastermind..
Just U are revolving round; Another my heart couldn't find..

All my mind does say is that I was misunderstood..
But internally, I know well that I was so rude..
U don't recognize me anymore; I'm perished in 'ASH'..
Found no blood, though the heart is squeezed in Squash..

Before, I was cheerful; I wasn't so dumb..
But from that day, my life has changed; I have become NUMB...! !
One day, like my hair, my heart will curl..
I've become so Lonely Just because of a Girl..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Being broken hearted by a girl is painful indeed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Sai R 04 May 2012

your poem vividly shows how a girl can create c change in one's life...nicely said in poetic diction

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Johnathan Juarez 03 May 2012

Liked it it was cool bro

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